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Dread Abyss
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Wow, that's good. Though I couldn't resist trying once more.
The matoran were unaware of the vicious creatures that hunt from the shadows and drag their victims into the perilous shadows; to cloak the island in inescapable darkness would be mere child's play for the makuta.
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Colonel Banryx
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| Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 6:40 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks. Let's trying merging them.
If one could see into the mind of a Makuta, past all the staggering darkness, past all the malevolance, it is truly very simple. "Why not make a matoran's life exciting?" one might think, and the other Makuta would agree. After all, what is more exciting than overwhelming odds against one's life? For such a small word, death can really fill a Makuta's mind. |
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General Ceyrox
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| Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 1:55 am Post subject: |
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Ha! Beautiful!
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Colonel Banryx
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General Ceyrox
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| Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 9:16 pm Post subject: |
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Post it here! Then on BZP!
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