Bzpower Discussion Topic

Dread Abyss · Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 1:46 am Post subject:

It says that you two are just members, does it take a day?

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General Ceyrox · Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 1:56 am Post subject:

It said we would be "within the week"
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Dread Abyss · Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 3:36 am Post subject:

That's cool; what do you two plan to do as premier members?
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And you think that everything's wrong/You ask me how to carry on/We'll make it through another day just hold on"
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General Ceyrox · Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 5:03 am Post subject:

I don't know, I just thought we'd try it.
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Dread Abyss · Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 5:48 am Post subject:

I'd rather spend the money on Bionicles.

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And you think that everything's wrong/You ask me how to carry on/We'll make it through another day just hold on"
—Elite Lord Abyss—
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Colonel Banryx · Guest

It was only about five bucks.

Dread Abyss · Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 11:31 pm Post subject:

Yeah, no bionicles are that cheap anymore... though the cheap, new matoran come close.

Are you going to make polls now?
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"You say you feel so down/Everytime I turn around/You say you should've been gone by now
And you think that everything's wrong/You ask me how to carry on/We'll make it through another day just hold on"
—Elite Lord Abyss—
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General Ceyrox · Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 12:52 am Post subject:

I like my rank image. Plus, we only have to wait 45 days to change our names.

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Colonel Banryx · Guest

I made a poll already. And a blog.

General Ceyrox · Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 2:26 am Post subject:

Plus we got two proto boosts!
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Dread Abyss · Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:06 pm Post subject:

Should I name Raethr's epic In The Cage or We Are Prey?
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"You say you feel so down/Everytime I turn around/You say you should've been gone by now
And you think that everything's wrong/You ask me how to carry on/We'll make it through another day just hold on"
—Elite Lord Abyss—
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Colonel Banryx · Guest

If I knew anything about it, I could tell you.

General Ceyrox · Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 3:52 am Post subject:

Duffman says We are Prey, because your rahi MOCs will probably be in it. Oh yeah!
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Dread Abyss · Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 9:45 pm Post subject:

Alright, that's cool. We Are Prey works well for the theme of an island full of dangerous predatorial rahi.

The story is: Raethr ends up isolated on a desolate island full of deadly rahi as he tries to be a toa and save the remaining matoran, if there are any. He's told that the remaining matoran should be hiding in the remains of a giant building that served as a zoo, the zoo is at the other side of the island so Raethr must fight his way across the island.
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"You say you feel so down/Everytime I turn around/You say you should've been gone by now
And you think that everything's wrong/You ask me how to carry on/We'll make it through another day just hold on"
—Elite Lord Abyss—
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Colonel Banryx · Guest

This vaguely reminds me of Jurrasic Park. Just pointing that out. And I'd say we are prey is a better name. And just a suggestion. For someone who's had like five epics, I suggest you don't make Raethr solo. It's much easier to write for someone if he has a partner of some sort...

Dread Abyss · Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 12:25 am Post subject:

Yeah, it reminds me of Jurassic Park 3 as well. Though they have their significant differences.

I'm sort of making Raethr solo, there's a Dark Hunter and seven other matoran in it, but he's mostly alone in the dangerous terrains. Plus the first two chapters show Raethr's life on Metru Nui so there are several other toa he interacts with.
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"You say you feel so down/Everytime I turn around/You say you should've been gone by now
And you think that everything's wrong/You ask me how to carry on/We'll make it through another day just hold on"
—Elite Lord Abyss—
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General Ceyrox · Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 2:09 am Post subject:

I really can't see you stretching that out into an epic... :ha:
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Colonel Banryx · Guest

I agree with Ceyrox...

And let me rephrase that: You really SHOULD make him have another character he can talk to... it is very necessary.

General Ceyrox · Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:35 am Post subject:

Also Abyss, make me, Banryx, you, Storms, and Bane moderators here... would you?
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Lord Storms · Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:57 am Post subject:

I agree with Banryx*. You need to have one or two other people with Raethr.

*It's the apocalypse!
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Colonel Banryx · Guest

Abyss and Storms don't need to be moderators...

Dread Abyss · Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 7:07 am Post subject:

The chapters won't just be of Raethr, they'll also center around six matoran on a quest as well as a Dark Hunter and a matoran. Raethr will eventually meet up with the Dark Hunter. Oh, I know how to easily expand the epic.

Sure, you guys can be moderators.
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"You say you feel so down/Everytime I turn around/You say you should've been gone by now
And you think that everything's wrong/You ask me how to carry on/We'll make it through another day just hold on"
—Elite Lord Abyss—
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Colonel Banryx · Guest

What I'm saying is that it's going to be annoying when Raether's all alone. He needs someone to talk to, to go after, or to make mistakes that he simply can't make. Trust me when I say, it is very necessary.

Dread Abyss · Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:20 am Post subject:

Raethr acts as the guy in the action scenes as he's usually fighting different rahi, the six matoran story works well for the interaction that's needed. The flashbacks of the different sections of the island work well also.
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"You say you feel so down/Everytime I turn around/You say you should've been gone by now
And you think that everything's wrong/You ask me how to carry on/We'll make it through another day just hold on"
—Elite Lord Abyss—
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Lord Storms · Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 4:24 am Post subject:

It's an interesting idea.

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