Bzpower Discussion Topic

Lord Storms · Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 3:36 am Post subject:

I really like that intro.

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General Ceyrox · Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 4:01 am Post subject:

Good to know Storms.
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Dread Abyss · Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 6:47 am Post subject:

Colonel Banryx · Guest

I still don't like the intro very much. If I was just browsing the forum and I happened to come across it, it wouldn't catch my interest. It is hard though. That's why like no one(Including Abyss) ever posts in my epics.

Lord Storms · Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 4:15 am Post subject:

What ARE your epics?
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General Ceyrox · Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 4:34 am Post subject:

He's got five. Off the top of my head I can think... Nothing is Something, eh... I can't remember anymore.
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Colonel Banryx · Guest

I never finished any of them.

Lord Storms · Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 4:27 pm Post subject:

Why not?
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Colonel Banryx · Guest

Well... I always end up thinking of the ending before I finish it, and then I make it so glamorous I want to get there as quickly as possible. I make the epic boring just to get to the ending, and then I get bored of writing filler chapters, and I post less and less, and then eventually stop.

Lord Storms · Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 5:35 am Post subject:

Ah. That's why you make the filler's fun.
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Colonel Banryx · Guest

Like Naruto? :ha:

Lord Storms · Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 6:41 pm Post subject:

Lol. Yes, like Naruto.
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Colonel Banryx · Guest

Hmph. I'd just rather not have filler whatsoever.

Lord Storms · Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 11:37 pm Post subject:

Then what? One adventure for the entire epic?
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General Ceyrox · Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 12:19 am Post subject:

Or you could keep switching adventures, like every five chapters. Wouldn't be quite so fillery.
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Lord Storms · Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 5:03 am Post subject:

But if you have nothing but that adventure it'll get boring. I prefer something more like '01, '04, or '09.
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Colonel Banryx · Guest

Hm... well you can have different adventures... oh, I get what you're saying. Different adventures but the same antagonist. Okay. Gotcha!

Dread Abyss · Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 4:51 pm Post subject:

That's sort of how it was with Daarkhao (whom I will rename as Dairek, I like that name

). He acts as a mercenary and does several different jobs, but keeps on getting reminded of his past and how he's powerless to prevent it from happening again. The idea of having the same antagonist is sort of what I have for Ksharn, he manages to turn people into powerful maniacs or do something different, like with the Gryshiiv (plural of Gryshiv).
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Lord Storms · Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 8:50 pm Post subject:

Wait, who are these characters?
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Dread Abyss · Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 9:18 pm Post subject:

Made up characters that Banryx and Ceyrox know about. Though I don't think they know much about them... Oops.
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Colonel Banryx · Guest

Well, you never tell us. And Dairek is too much of a human name.

Lord Storms · Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 1:37 am Post subject:

I agree with Banryx. Dairek is too human.

Can you tell me about these chars?
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General Ceyrox · Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 1:38 am Post subject:

He wants to make them in a different epic. You're right Abyss, we don't know much about him. Mind explaining them a bit? :ha:
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Colonel Banryx · Guest

I'll tell you what I know...

Daarkhao: A former Toa of Fire who used to be on a Toa team. Each member of the team had like two elements or something, and Ksharn, a Makuta, tricked Daarkhao into switching the one that wasn't fire for shadow. He became a Toa of Shadow Fire, and when one of his teamates pissed him off, he killed them all. I believe that's the story, although I'm sketchy on details.

Grishiiv: My favorite. They're a species of intelligent rahi. I know Abyss has one that's named Glishva, or something, and he makes weapons and has the ability to negate all elemental powers within a forty foot radius, I think?